Beauty or a Beast, problems?

Hi all. So it has come to my attention that my story 'Beauty or a Beast?' apparently has some issues with the way it has been written, and the overall plot.
I have had some comments concerning these things. One, let me say feed back is feed back, and I appreciate all of it. And two, I'm not complaining about it but I would like to point out some things.

1) This is a FICTIONAL story. So no, it's not all going to be realistic, or have all of the facts straight.
2) This is my first story that I have uploaded on this site, so I'm still learning. Before I upload any of my other ones I will re-edit them.
3) I know that the first chapter was a bit "Rushed", but like I said its a story, right?
4) Yes, I know that DID is an actual thing. What Kade has in the story is just something I based it on.
5) The relationship between the two main character's has been "rushed", but I wanted their relationship to be like that. It's supposed to be extremely flirty and/or physical.


My next story (which I hope will be uploaded soon) the relationship is already established, so there will be no "Rushing", and the other one that I'm currently writing has a very slow build and there will be lots of courting and a subtle build on the relationship. I started uploading Beauty or a beast first because its the fast-paced one and there will be more sexy scenes compared to my other stories. Lets face it, the more sexy things there are the more it attracts people, right?

In light of all this, I would like to say thank you to all the people who have commented, faved, or have added me to their watch.
It means alot.